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 two shots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun like an assasin... that does it for fun to deafning blows in a war thats just begun life is gone... i'm done  two red roses sitting on my coffin the wind blows leaving only one the world as i know it is disappering like the ... setting sun   THATS ONE HERES ANOTHER I am crying my heart out
Drowing in tears
No one to save me
Because you're not here

I love you
But you'll never love me
This is a sick, wrong feeling
Yet without you, feeling is empty

What I'm trying to say is....
How do I put this is words?
Maybe this is something....you should have never heard

This burden maybe should be kept
'Till the end
'Till my death
But, that is now and I must say
I love you still, and die I may 
   

 just can't go on with my life
Without you I'm living a lie
I'm lying to the world
I'm lying to myself that I'm content

I am so miserable in this cold world
I hope your living your life as if you never knew me
I glance at the photographs of us
Turn them face down and run from the truth
I try to hold back my tears
But the only way I can really be happy
Is if you cut my throat ear to ear

AND YET ANOTHER

You could have saved me
Instead you forgot me and erased me from your memory
I wait in the shadows for my misery to consume me
Why can't I just leave this empty place
And never return again?
I laid here a hundred times before, this is not the same,
I don't know why I'm here anymore all I feel is pain, I gave up my everything just to help you dry your eyes,
it still wasn't enough to keep you with by my side I wanted to keep you here in this black hole forever,
you swore to me your love, your devotion and your soul so now I'm once again stretching out
to survive another unstabling event another turn to be lonely and cold, I am so uncertain of what the future holds,
your arms somehow placed my mind into a slumber and it pulled me back together but now I see, someone decided to play a joke on me now I need to repair the scrapes you carved onto my face I need to refill my ghost with something new
But it is too difficult to let something new in
I still like the old more then the gold,
you broke me, you shattered the glass, you made me feel alive something I never experienced at any time
now I can't taste the meals.. I swallow down today my heart feels like it did before, I never knew how much it hurts to be so numb, once again My mind is cursing out your name, I'm back to where I began what is really making this liquid leak from my eyes is that once again all I got where lies
once again I was brought back into reality and this time it finally hurts
I remember your words, the ones I heard, you where the only one who I ever wanted but you let me
down pretty damn hard and some how I knew this would be it
you drained me, you played me, and demolished the only part of my hole that had not been damaged
by this cruel,cruel world I don't feel safe, I can still feel your face and your lips that brushed my tears away
I still smell your scent, it surrounds me when I want to move on, now I remember why
I made myself stop caring

THIS IS THE LAST ONE

You are the air
My need for existence
My every breath
Has your name on it
Without you I'd be
Another empty shell

You are the Queen
You rule my world
Your presence is majestic
Make me bow my head
I'll do anything
Surrender myself to you

You are the spark
That ignites my soul
Fuel that goes on burning
To show me the light
And prevent the darkness
From engulfing me

You are the blood
Running through my veins
Keeping this part
Alive and beating
Never will I cut
Fearing to let you out

You are the rain
That showers upon me
Makes everlasting love
Grow throughout me
Washing away the pain
Healing all my wounds

You are the one
Trespassing in my dreams
Holding me close
Caressing me so
Comforting my mind
Ending sleepless nights

You are not of this world
Because you were sent from above
An angel in disguise
Living deep inside
You have carved a space
I'll defend this place

Is it so wrong to say "i love you,",
to someone i barely know?
Should i hide these built up feelings,
Or let them overflow?
Should I cast aside how i really feel,
To be a normal person,
Or should i embrace and realize
It is not a curse.
I call love a feeling,
And i feel that for you,
If i say it first then maybe
You'll admit it too.
But if i keep it on the down low,
Not to anyone let it show,
Maybe you'll find a new love
And we will never know.
Not know how it could be,
Me loving you,
Maybe you loving me?
If i hide it you could die,
And I'd never say goodbye,
Maybe you'd just go away,
Leaving me to cry,
But probably i'd just find out
You're with another guy.
To me, none of those fly,
and its now or never,
Do or die.
I say... "I love you"

OH SORRY THIS IS THE LAST

 On the news it said,
The world was going to end.
And thats when it hit me,
You were more than just a friend.

I close my eyes,
And see your beautiful face.
Wishing that right now,
I could feel your embrace.

If the world is ending,
Theres something I gotta do.
And thats hold you close,
And whisper, I love you.

We go together,
Like hand and glove fits,
And I want you in my arms,
When that asteroid hits.

I made this poem in 30 seconds:

this peace I want is not here
Why must it go
come closer
I have been searching for so long
I must go and find it
I hurd a name so gentle
It called me
I knew what it was
it was the peace I searched for
it is now here
huging me with its warmth
it will not go
it shall not go
because I know now were
it is in this one
his name i love
jesus my savor and my all.

Cool but sad poems!

yeah i made them a while ago ive been lookin on the brighter side of life for a whle now

I love thee as I love the calm of the sweet star lit hours.

And I love thee as I love the blam of early Jasmine flowers.

I love thee of the last rich smile of the faiding day,

Which lingereth like the look we cast on rapsured part away.

I love thee like I love the tone of the whispering flute,

who's solo is wait for me alone when all the world is mute.